Aaron Mast
Ms. Gold
English 103
8 October 2009
Student 1- Copies major chunks of the text without citing anything. He can fix this by re writing his paper with consideration to the sources paraphrasing them and citing as needed.
Student 2- Does not identify how much of his paper is from each citation and he draws no conclusions. To fix his paper he should cite his sources more effectively and come up with his own conclusions about the sources.
Student 3- Cites the sources correctly, paraphrasing them and only a few times directly quoting them. He shows how the two articles contrast but does not show an opinion or conclusion he made by himself.
Student 4- Cites the sources correctly and does well the only thing they could do to improve their paper is to make a conclusion on what they think themselves based on the two sources.
Student 5- Cites the sources correctly making sure to show where direct quotations are used. The student also effectively shows his stance on this issue based on the two sources.
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